I know there's some pacing issues with it...some important story points are being lost. It needs quite dramatic tweaking, as it's a bit of a mess at the moment. I AM trying to make it shorter without losing anything important. I hope to speak to a tutor tomorrow, hopefully Tom or Parr. I'll be there for about 11am if anyone wants to join me and hear what abuse is hurled at it.
Following a tutorial, I'll re edit the animatic.
I am ambitious.
But four minutes is pushing it, even for me.